Mirror Dingy What Do You Think?

What do you think? - mirror dingy

Please let me know what you think. More importantly, what needs to be changed. Thank you for your data go.
It was almost noon, and the landscape, with exposed beams and sounds of spring. Today was particularly timely, not only because he is the true day of spring, when nobody was sure there would be no more snow, but also by a certain type, small and vain woman was preparing his things. She lived alone with two young men in an ungrateful little inn, decrepit, was on the edge of the village. They were stray dogs left in sixteen of the former house of her deceased husband. She has never loved and clear, whenever possible.
A young man, Marc, was standing behind the counter of the few customers who had prepared that day. It was almost nineteen years old, handsome and dressed in range and it would seem, leaves stapled brought negligence. She looked out the window opposite his brother, who was equally attractive. In fact, it was more like a mirror through a window, since they are identical to each OTin all physical aspects. Marc futile attempt to clean a dirty glass with a dirty rag while you wait for the dispute with his brother, the driver in front of the entrance to the hostel. It's a wild movement, as was the driver in a bad mood, he was a neck so short comic strip was going to be a thief so far only seen on the face of the enemy.